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:His Eyes:

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His brilliant blue eyes pierced mine.
For the Six Word Story Contest!
#SixWordStories' Open Theme Contest.

There's been a lot of entries but I'll doubt I'll win. Doesn't matter. So long as I had a go. :)

Enjoy. :)

I think I might expand this latter.

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3wyl's avatar
I like the way you've explained it and how forceful it appears to be, and yet it's also beautiful because of the use of "brilliant". I feel as if it's a bit conflicted because of that.

Interesting stuff, anyway. I like the phrasing and the direction you've gone in with this piece. :)